Sunday, 10 May 2009

part 9: just when you thought the tale might turn

It doesn't. No. ken is dead there. You can see him there all spiked an' that.
Down in that pit,
- then, now, a swirling, tingling sound rising ...
.... is there going to be some reversal of fortune !??
probably not, I mean ken's dead, clearly ...
.... but IS he !? but wait ! .... no.
No, he really IS dead, I mean who could survive a mad fall like that,
and on to some rusty spikes an' all. There's no way you could survive.
Yet, there is still that swirling tingling sound ....

2 comments:

Laurie Cannon said...

Like all those false alarms with
Austin Power's peeing
-stopped yet?
yes.
No, wait a minute...
yes, he's done.
no, wait.

The ocean held its breath for 30 - 37 minutes.

I love your writing

boxof said...

you really do say the nicest things.
That's why I like you.

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